Hi Everyone! I've developed an updated prototype, and I'd love to get your opinion on it. I'm still working on some crazy bugs, but the bones are here. You might be better off downloading it and reading it that way. Actually, it would be amazing if you could. I only have so many kinds of phones and tablets to test it on.

The other question is, is one chapter enough? I'm going to do another demo with a Sherlock Holmes short story, so authors can get a different feel for how these can look. But I'd love any feedback you can give me! Can you download it? Did all of the links work for you? Was there content you thought should be included, and wasn't? I want to hear all of it, not just the good stuff.